I’ve been blocked for over a week trying to put words in Chanel’s mouth.
Approach One: Give Chanel a speech that describes the event that dashed her hopes and caused her current heartache.
Result: Too much talking!
Approach Two: Give Chanel three, four sentences at most about the event and let the audience assume that it’s important.
Result: Her speech is stripped away to nonsense!
Approach Three: Skip the speech. Move on to more important exchanges like this one:
Cody No, Chanel, that’s not true; that’s not true at all! Every time I look at you, I can’t go a minute without thinking about my prong in your gash.
Result: Looks like I’m back on track….